This 12 year old writes better (and has better handwriting) than 98% of the 17 year old high school students whose essays I have been scoring.
Good thesis, well supported. Bonus points for proper use of the apostrophe. Additional bonus points for making me laugh (most essays make me want to drink an adult beverage or two…or three…).
LOVE THIS!!! The indignity of being a bagel can not be overstated!
This 12 year old writes better (and has better handwriting) than 98% of the 17 year old high school students whose essays I have been scoring.
Good thesis, well supported. Bonus points for proper use of the apostrophe. Additional bonus points for making me laugh (most essays make me want to drink an adult beverage or two…or three…).
I NEED to know her stance on crullers.
What a great, passionate essay. What are her thoughts on muffins? They are just bald cupcakes, you know.
RT — Yes, I noticed the correct use of the apostrophe! Good for him/her.
NF — This kid could do a whole series.
The words that go down the side crack me up. Did he/she forget the words “strawberry” and “shouldn’t” and that’s why they’re like that? So funny.
Kathi — Hahahahaha.
Rant on, kiddo!
I loved the phrase “shiny silver walls”–alliteration and imagery. Good stuff.
Hahaha.